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PostPosted: 2011-05-12 8:23 
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Kurinyje yra tai, ko labai pasigendu megejiskoje fantastikoje. Drama sitame zanre yra nykstantis momentas uzgoztas neismaningo jumorelio ir pseudonuotykiu. Todel sveikinu uzgavus keleta stygu, tai pakankamai originalu siuose konkursuose (cia lengva ironija skirta ne autoriui :) )
Del smulkmenu pastabu nebus, siuzetines linijas dar galima istobulinti, bet mintis pagaunama.
Nuosirdziai linkiu autoriui sekmes brendant is japoniniu multiku liuno :D

P.s. Buciau nedares laimingos pabaigos, jei manes kas nors klaustu.

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