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PostPosted: 2003-12-27 23:26 
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Būtų įdomu sužinoti jūsų nuomone apie šį apsakymą.


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PostPosted: 2003-12-28 12:47 
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O man tai visai patiko :wink: , tik tai pasakojimas labai nenuoseklus , trukinejantis :twisted:


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PostPosted: 2003-12-28 20:43 
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Idejos lyg ir buta neblogos, bet jos ishraishka pusetina, nuo tolesniu komentaru susilaikysiu, nes pats geriau neparashyciau.
Beje, labai daug gramatiniu/spausdinimo klaidu.[/img]


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PostPosted: 2003-12-29 1:16 
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tinginio pantis wrote:
Beje, labai daug gramatiniu/spausdinimo klaidu.[/img]
Čia gal ne autorės kaltė - kūrinys "nuskaitytas" skaneriu nuo spausdinto teksto ir, matyt, netaisytas.


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PostPosted: 2003-12-29 18:37 
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man patiko, itrauke kol neperskaiciau sustori negalejau


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PostPosted: 2003-12-29 19:13 
gedas wrote:
Čia gal ne autorės kaltė - kūrinys "nuskaitytas" skaneriu nuo spausdinto teksto ir, matyt, netaisytas.
Tai ne ji atsiunte? ;)


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PostPosted: 2003-12-30 10:51 
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Palikim ramybeje gramatines ir kitokias tikekimes del skenavimo atsiradusias klaidas ;)
Skaitosi nesunkiai, zhiovulio nesukelia, bet palieka neisbaigtumo ispudi...
Kai kur akis bado shablonishkos frazes, is konteksto iskrenta ne itin vyke "juokeliai". Kurinys parasytas neblogai, matyt, ne pirmas autores bandymas. Niuroka atmosfera, bet ka noreti is tokios temos :)
Kiek cia fantastikos, kiek kitokiu zanru, paliksiu aiskinti protingesniems ;)
Tokia "mano kukli asmenine nuomone" ;)

P.S. Dziugu, kad atgijo kuriniu skyrelis.


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PostPosted: 2003-12-30 23:08 
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raww wrote:
Niuroka atmosfera, bet ka noreti is tokios temos...
Kiek cia fantastikos, kiek kitokiu zanru...
Aha, o man atmosfera pasirode pernelyg linksma, ash buciau rashes daug niuriau ir gresmingiau, ir be bajeriuku, nors tai labai sunku :wink:
Ir dabar kai raww pasake, supratau, kad chia ne fantastika, o tik jos vyresnioji sesute mistika ar siaubelis :)


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PostPosted: 2004-01-08 22:22 
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Is esmes pritariu raww - per daug sablonu ir pabaiga neisbaigta visiskai. Siaip velnio tema is viso sunku varijuoti. Man kazkodel skaitant si apsakyma visa laika Oldziu "8 isakymo posuniai" akyse maisesi. O siaip tai puse velnio ;] apsakymas.

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PostPosted: 2004-01-09 10:28 
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