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PostPosted: 2005-05-11 23:01 
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Perskaičiau. Nieko nesupratau. Perskaičiau dar kartelį. Vis vien nieko nesupratau. Ir kodėl man šis kūrinys primena kompiuteriu generuotą skyrelį iš "Atlanta Nights" ?

Chapter 34

Bruce walked around any more. Some people might ought to her practiced eye, at her. I am so silky and braid shoulders. At sixty-six, men with a few feet away form their languid gazes.
I know I was hungry, and impelling him lying naked. She slowly made for a man could join you I know what I ought to take you probably should have. He wants it worriedly. About think what to wear?
Then they reached under her time and got out and did your find my real mother’s name, his fancy, rented by a passing delivery truck. Well, Maggie Ooh, Andrew, you but I know my leftover cake!
Girls are here at one of a pool and the pool cleaner maneuvering his surprise that. He smiled certain her way down cruel and flashed him.


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Čia turbūt tas, kaip jį, pasąmonės srautas. Ne mano žanras, t'sakant.

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Kaip pasąmonės srautas (krakadyla sako, reik tikėt) - man visai patiko.
Tik kažkaip neradau nė vieno sąlyčio taško su konkurso sąlygomis. Nelabai suprantu, kodėl šį kūrinį išvis priėmė kaip konkursinį? Todėl, kad kitų nebuvo? Tuomet apdovanokime po mirties Bilūną. Jo "Kliudžiau" nors ne apie zebrą, bet irgi neblogas. 8)


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Na, prikliedeta normaliai :)


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Parašyta gražiai, turinio neradau :) Patiko apie spygliuočius ir lapuočius...

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Deja, mano IQ per žemas, kad suprasčiau ,bet gražu..


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taip. samones srautas. taip..., tai yra, ne - man nepatiko.

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Maniau, kad Skemos "Balta drobule" yra sizovas kurinys, bet cia...

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PostPosted: 2005-05-12 22:00 
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Pastangos pagirtinos. Fantastika, ir dar moderni forma. Man patiko.


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