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 Post subject: Raww "Svajone"
PostPosted: 2003-05-14 22:49 
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kaip galima apibudint "Svajone"? Manyciau tinkmiausiai tiktu ja pavadint pasakele pries miega. Lengvas siuzetas, (em, jo visai nera;]) ideja paimta is senu vaikisku pasakeliu: vargsas kareivelis isimyli turtinga mergaite, bet vat atsiranda negerietis tete ar panasiai. tai siuo atveju raww biski pakeite veikejus, bet esme isliko ta pati. as neesu pries tokius dalykus bet ir ne uz. vienintelis geras dalykas, kad neistempe ir yra lengvai skaitoma.

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PostPosted: 2003-05-15 0:05 
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praeitis yra sapnas
ateitis yra svajone
gyvenimas yra dabartis.
Stenkis graizia gyventi,
kad turetum grazius sapnus
ir grazias svajones

budizmas

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mano nuomone tai tikrai smagus kurinukas. daugiau tokiu ;]

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PostPosted: 2003-05-15 1:06 
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aha. pralinksmino mane :)


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PostPosted: 2003-05-15 14:15 
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Jei kaip konkursinis - neblogas, neblogas. Nors pati uzduoties pradzia (t.y. pirmasis sakinys), imho, pigokai vulgaroka.


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PostPosted: 2003-05-15 22:54 
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ei ei vyrai! cia ne as parasiau, cia istrauka ish budizmo mokymo :D

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PostPosted: 2003-05-16 0:32 
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gedas wrote:
Nors pati uzduoties pradzia (t.y. pirmasis sakinys), imho, pigokai vulgaroka.
em, mane kaip tik primas sakinys labai suintrigavo, zadejo but tox linxmas simbolistinis(gal);] kurinukas deja pirmu sakiniu ir viskas pasibaige..

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O man paprasciausiai patiko 8)


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PostPosted: 2003-06-02 23:59 
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Mielas kurinukas. Patiko ir tai, kad trumpas, aiskus, be jokiu ten labai uzslapstytu ar nesuprantamu minciu. Taip, ir nuo pat pirmo sakinio iskart intriga. :D Tik kazkaip is pradziu truputi banaloka pasirode ta ju meile (tipo meile tarp dvieju vienas kitam netinkanciu partneriu), bet pagalvojus ir ji irgi ten visai gerai isejo. :)

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Fainas kurinukas. Toks paprastas ir smagus :)


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